Hi community! Can you please provide your feedback on the brainstorming? Ideally, 2-3 things to improve performance by 30-40%.

In TCO I sessions, I've heard from Michael that collecting community feedback on your performance is appreciated. I've uploaded my attempt on Google Drive on Samantha Session 11 Brainstorm Smartphone Impact on Telcos. Context - I've not watched Samantha's coaching session 11 or perfect answer video yet and didn't pre-write the answer. link to self-recording: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OsKAtJbLohrYMRofGINTMr2iq5f_wsRt/view?usp=share_link

It's the first time I've posted here, so please let me know whether this request is appropriate. Have a great day!